The visit

The crystalline water, the brilliant blue sky and the mountain range all around gave off a distinct feel of a visit inside of a Raphael’s painting.

What had been a fun trip had turned into something else the minute I had bumped into him. I wondered if he would pop the question even now while I sat lost in my thoughts.

That would never do. I reminded myself of the real reason I had brought him here. Would he be the same if he knows my true identity?

We were separated by not just distance but by millions of years of evolution. Would he still look at me the same way if he knew my real form or that of my home world that his people called the “Proxima Centaurus”?

Linking up with Tina and Mayuri for fridayfotofiction.



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  1. Matches are made in heaven… and its the same for Earth and Proxima Centaurus. So she need not worry!.True love transcends universe! Out of the world take on the prompt Lavanya!

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  2. On second thought, a naughty one this time…Will she not be too hot to handle? For she has come from Proxima Centauri, the dwarf star and he from planet EarthπŸ˜›πŸ˜πŸ˜

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  3. Love transcends all, doesn’t it?

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  4. Does it matter you wonder. It’s the love that truly does at the end of it right?

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  5. Love will see them through! Unique take on the prompt Lavanya! Lovely..

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  6. ThatΒ΄s a nice sci-twist to an otherwise mundane love story…Hahaha! The narration is quite engrossing…very creative, Lavanya! And the site looks awesome…just saw the new look…Kudos…:)

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  7. Love the creativity here. Your story has taken us to what could be the probable future.
    Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

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  8. Love will always be there! Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction.

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